Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Essay 2-02b: My Oasis



I talk about my favorite place. My favorite place is a hot spring in my town. It is called Samata-no-yu. It is famous in my town. Many people visit the place. Also I often went to there with my friend and my family. When I was a junior high school student, I went to there with my friend most every day because we liked a hot spring. I think I like the best that go to there on winter. Do you like a hot spring?? What is your favorite hot spring?? If you are tired, I recommend you go to a hot spring. Maybe I think you can relax.

First, Samata-no-yu has the beautiful aspect. Parking area is large. Many people can visit there. A building is made for a tree. It is easy for people to visit. There are some rest room and saloon. If you want to rest, you can lie down for rest. You can eat a shaved ice during a summer. There is also TV. Many customers watch the TV. I like this room, too. I often did my homework with my friend. Moreover there is the place to eat meals. So if you are hungry, you can eat many kind of food. This meals are very good taste!!! People should eat them. I think it is important for people to make the place which people can relax and rest.

Second, there is the big common bath and the family bath. There are Sauna, Open air bath, and various kind of bath in the big common bath. I like the best place which sauna in a hot spring. But I can't stay in Sauna long time because it is very hot!!! Can you stay in Sauna long time? Open air bath make me relax. There is power shower in it. This get out shoulder discomfort and fatigue. So you can feel good. Also there is a TV. So you can watch TV. After I leaving the sauna, I like to enter the cold-water bath. You also try to do so.

Do you know the electric bath? It is charged electric in the bath. If you take this bath, you may feel a tingling. Sometimes I take this bath, but I don't like this because I feel a pain. But I think I am supposed to be good for health. If you take this bath, you need to careful little. Some parts of electricity out into the bath, but you should avoid getting too close to there.

The family baths are private rooms. Therefore, the bath is small, and narrow. However, it is possible to relax and enjoy the rooms because there are not other customers. When I was a high school student, I often had been to there with my family. It is also possible to watching TV, and we can also eat meal. I loved fried chicken there. I want to eat it for a long time. I think it was the best fried chicken ever. I think the good thing about the family baths are comfortable and enjoy only family.

After take a hot spring, I always drink a bottle of coffee milk. This is so delicious!!! This is my enjoyment. If you go to hot spring, you should do that. Maybe you can relax more. And I think good you sit the massage chair. If I go to hot spring next time, I want to use it.

Hot spring makes us relax us. I think that when you are tired, and it is the best way to go to hot springs. There is a lots of famous of hot springs in Kumamoto. I've never been to Kurokawa hot spring, I want to go on holiday. And if you know the hot spring which you recommend, I want you to tell me. I love hot springs, and I am very interested it. If you have time, please try to go to the various hot spring. You may find the best hot spring!!

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Wednesday, October 23, 2013

Essays 2-02a: My Favorite Place

I talk about my favorite place. My favorite place is a hot spring in my town. It is called Samata-no-yu. It is famous in my town. Many people visit the place. Also I often went to there with my friend and my family. When I was a junior high school student, I went to there with my friend most every day because we liked a hot spring. I think I like the best that go to there on winter. Do you like a hot spring?? What is your favorite hot spring?? If you are tired,  I recommend you go to a hot spring. Maybe I think you can relax.

First, Samata-no-yu has the beautiful aspect. Parking area is large. Many people can visit there. A building is made for a tree. It is easy for people to visit. There are some rest room and saloon. If you want to rest, you can lie down for rest. You can eat a shaved ice during a summer. There is also TV. Many customers watch the TV. I like this room, too. I often did my homework with my friend. Moreover there is the place to eat meals. So if you are hungry, you can eat many kind of food. This meals are very good taste!!! People should eat them. I think it is important for people to make the place which people can relax and rest.

Second, there is the big common bath and the family bath. There are Sauna, Open air bath, and various kind of bath in the big common bath. I like the best place which sauna in a hot spring. But I can't stay in Sauna long time because it is very hot!!! Can you stay in Sauna long time? Open air bath make me relax. There is power shower in it. This get out shoulder discomfort and fatigue. So you can feel good. Also there is a TV. So you can watch TV. After I leaving the sauna, I like to enter the cold-water bath. You also try to do so.

Do you know the electric bath? It is charged electric in the bath. If you take this bath, you may feel a tingling. Sometimes I take this bath, but I don't like this because I feel a pain. But I think I am supposed to be good for health. If you take this bath, you need to careful little. Some parts of electricity out into the bath, but you should avoid getting too close to there.

Family bath has become the private room. Therefore, the bath is small, and narrow. However, it is possible to relax slowly living in the room. When I was a high school student, I often had been to there with my family. It is also possible to watching TV, and we can also eat meal. I loved fried chicken there. I want to eat it for a long time. I think it was the best fried chicken ever. I think the good thing about family bath is comfortable and enjoy only family.

Hot spring makes us relax us. I think that when you are tired, and it is the best way to go to hot springs. There is a lots of famous of hot springs in Kumamoto. I've never been to Kurokawa hot spring, I want to go on holiday. And if you know the hot spring which you recommend, I want you to tell me. I love hot springs, and I am very interested it. If you have time, please try to go to the various hot spring. You may find the best hot spring!!

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Wednesday, October 16, 2013

My Favorite Place



This is essay prep map. This is about the hot spring in my city.




My Favorite Place


I will talk about my favorite place.
When I was a junior high school student, I often went to the hot springs with my best friend and my family. The name of this place is 佐俣の湯. This is famous for people in my city. I was often running with my friend in the winter. After that, we went to there. So we can relax very much.


Recently, I don’t go that place because it is far from my house. Now, I stay alone near by KGU. But I want to go there with my best friend. 

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Monday, October 14, 2013

TH-07: My Favorite High School Memory

My favorite high school memory is the school festival. When I was a senior in high school, I formed my own band with my friends. I did want to form the band. So I was glad because I can form my own band. We always practiced hard. In the school festival, I was very nervous. I sung 2 songs. Then, I erupted in cheers from many students. I was really excited. Now, I don't form that band. But the school festival is important for us. Also it is our treasure.   I want to return to the past. Because I always practiced volleyball, I think that became my good memory.


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TH-06: My Favorite Movie

My favorite movie is Spirited Away. It was made by Hayao Miyazaki. There are many famous movies in the work of him. Spirited Away is one of famous movie. I often watched the Ghibli because it was very interesting! His production is described delicately. And each painting is very beautiful. Not only painting, but also a lot of music which using in his production are wonderful! I love this music. Wonderful music is used the Spirited Away, too. I think everyone watched this movie before. If you don't watch it yet, you should absolutely watch it. All his production is becoming thought-provoking work about various things. These days I don't watch it. But I want to watch it again on holiday. I maybe I can relax. I was looking forward to coming out his new production in the future. But He retired his work. So I miss you. I worry about the Ghibli after this.


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H-05: Something Special I Did During the Vacation

I went to amusement park with my boyfriend in 16th to 17th, September. I always want to go there. I was really excited because I went to there after years of separation. I like thrill ride very much!!! We rode the roller coaster many times. But I couldn't ride the trapeze because that time was big windy day. And we couldn't ride some a midway ride. We rode the Ferris wheel last time of the day. My boyfriend was afraid of ride it because he has an acrophobia. But it is became a cherished memory for us. We had enjoyed at that time. I want to thanks for my boyfriend.

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TH-04: Good and Bad Points About Summer

I think good points about summer that very hot whether and many people are going sea. In the summer, we go to swim in the sea. I want to go to sea, but I didn't go there in this summer and last summer. I want to go there next summer definitely. Bad points about summer are suffering from the summer heat. If you suffer from it, you lose your appetite because of the heat. So everyone are careful it! Moreover I often turn on an air conditioner, but it cost money. We must save it. There is good and bad points about summer. But it is important for people to enjoy summer!!!

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TH-03: How I Study During The Vacation


I am deciding study a qualification during the summer vacation. I was studying it during first term. I am doing a course to take a qualification. It has every Tuesday and Saturday. Of course, also I will go to a course during summer vacation. And I will study English. When I am going to go Texas, I want to speak English more. If I will speak to Kelsee, I speak Japanese because it become to study speaking Japanese for Kelsee. But, if I speak to Kelsee's family, I speak English. I wish I could speak English more. There are many things that I must do.

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TH-02: What Classes I will Take Next Term

I will almost take same classes with first term. But, I will change some classes because I thought there were unsuitable for me. And I am thinking that I want to take another class. I neglected my studies in first term. So I must try to study hard. Maybe I think I will become busier second term than first term. I want to do which I couldn't do something in first term. One of classes which I took in firs term was very difficult!!!! It is history class. I don't like it since always. I just can't learn it. But I don't know why I can't do it. So I fail that class. I must take it next year because it is a compulsory subject.

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TH-01: My Vacation Plans

I am going to go to Texas because I was promising that I meet Kelsee. I already decide to go there in 10th to 17th on September. This will be my first overseas trip. I am going to go alone. So I am scared little bit and becoming nervous. I think I will pass through many times. If I don't know where I should go, I will ask to someone. And it will become to study my speaking. Because I see Kelsee after all this time, I am looking forward to visiting to Texas. Anyway, I must never forget something. And I think I want to go carefully.


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Friday, October 4, 2013

Essays 2-01b : Revised My Learned Languages

I think I want to talk about my learned languages. I have ever been learned about 3 languages. The first is Japanese. It is my country's language. So, I am using it since my infancy. As we know there are Hiragana, Katakana, and Kanji in Japanese. I can write Hiragana and Katakana. But, I can't write all Kanji because there is a lot of kind of Kanji. Kanji is very difficult for other country's people whose are studying Japanese. I think it is also difficult for Japanese people. 

In elementary school, I have learned kanji and katakana and hiragana. It was not good at remembering Kanji, I remembered again and again to write. When I was a junior high school, I became to learn a little difficult kanji. I was studying it until high school students. I learned it naturally since then. I am Japanese, but I do not know  a lot of word yet. So, I have to study Japanese more.

Second, I learned English as a universal language. I have started to learn English , when I was the nursery. I have been interested in English from an early age. I belonged to the English club in elementary school. But, I did not know most of the words that teacher is  talking. In junior high school, I learned to write in the notebook a lot of words. When I became a high school students,  I did not like grammar. When I do not know it, I had remembered example sentence.

I  want to get a job which is using the English in the future. So, I want to take also Eiken and TOIEC among college students. Some qualifications I want to take other qualifications, but I think I will work hard one by one. I would like to use it to various things, since I have learned it. Even after I am becoming a university student, I have been studying English of course. 

Third, I learned German as a second language. It was interesting at first because there was a part that is similar to English. Teacher of German was very nice. So I was easy to take classes. Because I have took the class with my classmate, I was able to study together. In class, there were many times that write a German , but  there were also a lot of times of conversation. Because I have ever never to touch the German, I felt very difficult. In the test of the German, I could not take a very good result. I learned German about one year, but I could not master it well.

I think I was good to learn the German language because I could learned it which I don't study other language before. I thought that learning other languages ​​is difficult. But I could found the interesting things. German was really difficult, but I think I became a good experience. Also I am interesting Korean  So I want to study it little. Maybe I think I can remember by watching the Korean TV because I learned that way.


I had ever studied some languages. Languages are very interesting because it is different word and different pronunciation. Each languages are different. I could know various language.  My favorite language is English. So I try to study more! And I want to use English in the future. I think very good that exposure to various languages. 



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Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Essay 2-01a: My Learned languages

I have ever been learned about 3 languages. The first is Japanese. It is my country's language. So, I am using it since my infancy. As we know there are Hiragana, Katakana, and Kanji in Japanese. I can write Hiragana and Katakana. But, I can't write all Kanji because there is a lot of kind of Kanji. Kanji is very difficult for other country's people whose are studying Japanese. I think it is also difficult for Japanese people. 

In elementary school, I have learned kanji and katakana and hiragana. It was not good at remembering Kanji, I remembered again and again to write. When I was a junior high school, I became to learn a little difficult kanji. I was studying it until high school students. I learned it naturally since then. I am Japanese, but I do not know  a lot of word yet. So, I have to study Japanese more.

Second, I learned English as a universal language. I have started to learn English , when I was the nursery. I have been interested in English from an early age. I belonged to the English club in elementary school. But, I did not know most of the words that teacher is  talking. In junior high school, I learned to write in the notebook a lot of words. When I becama a high school students,  I did not like grammar. When I do not know it, I had remembered example sentence.

I  want to get a job which is useing the English in the future. So, I want to take also Eiken and TOIEC among college students. Some qualifications I want to take other qualifications, but I think I will work hard one by one. I would like to use it to various things, since I have learned it. Even after I am becoming a university student, I have been studying English of course. 

Third, I learned German as a second language. It was interesting at first because there was a part that is similar to English. Teacher of German was very nice. So I was easy to take classes. Because I have took the class with my classmate, I was able to study together. 

In class, there were many times that write a German , but  there were also a lot of times of conversation. Because I have ever never to touch the German, I felt very difficult. In the test of the German, I could not take a very good result. I learned German about one year, but I could not master it well.

I think I was good to learn the German language because I could learned it which I don't study other language before. I thought that learning other languages ​​is difficult. But I could found the interesting things. German was really difficult, but I think I became a good experience. Also I am interesting Corean. So I want to study it little. Maybe I think I can remember by watching the Corean TV because I learned that way.

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